12 Degrees & Skiving

what began as year-long challenge has become perpetual until further notice

Who is my muse? / Chi è la mia musa?

So here is where I thank my muse: my wonderful other half Marco. He helps me with modes of speech that are diverse in Italiano. English is his second language – and poetry is becoming his third.

That he has taken an active interest in my writing is elating; he is the first man in my life to do so without prompting, though, because it is poetry and I write in English, the language was leaving him behind. That’s why I took up this challenge: it teaches us both and helps us cross from either language bank and meet mid-river. 
Marco, thank you for all your help and endless patience. In fact, per everything you do. Ti Amo!

Italiano is my second language. I’m mastering it – slowly – and I’ve felt ready for the NaPoWriMo challenge enough to translate what I write in English into Italiano.
It’s not easy, not because it is a second language, but because of the third language involved – that of poetry.
In effect, I often find have written two discrete poems. When a poem is translated out of its original language, some things are lost (such as onomatopoeia and rhyme) and sometimes there are prettier words in one language than in the other. Phrasal verbs exist in English but not in Italiano. Double/hyphenated adjectives (sloe-eyed; long-limbed, etc) work in English but not in Italiano. But there is a staccato, often accidental musicality in Italiano that one has to work at harder at in English.
And so on.
I hope you’re enjoying reading them as much as I love writing them.

~ ~ ~

E così qui è dove ringrazio la mia musa : la mia meravigliosa altra metà di me, Marco . Lui mi aiuta con i modi di dire che sono diversi fra l’inglese e l’italiano . L’inglese è la seconda lingua di lui – e la poesia sta diventando il suo terzo .

Poiché ha preso un interesse attivo nella mia scrittura mi esalta ; lui è il primo uomo nella mia vita a farlo senza chiedere , ma perché è poesia e scritta in inglese , le lingue lo stavano lasciando indietro . Ecco perché ho preso questa sfida : ci insegna e ci aiuta attraversiamo dalle rive del linguaggio e ci incontriamo a metà del fiume. Marco , grazie per tutto il tuo aiuto e per la tua pazienza infinita . Per tutte le cose che fai, infatti. Ti Amo !

l’italiano è la mia seconda lingua . Lo sto dominando – lentamente – e mi sento pronta per la sfida NaPoWriMo abbastanza per tradurre ciò che scrivo in inglese , in Italiano .
Non è facile , non perché si tratta di una seconda lingua , ma a causa della terza lingua in questione – quella della poesia .
In effetti , ogni tanto trovo che ho scritto due poesie discrete. Quando una poesia viene tradotto dalla lingua originale , alcune cose si perdono (come onomatopee e la rima ) e , a volte ci sono le parole più bella in una lingua che nell’altra. Esistono i verbi frasali in inglese ma non in Italiano . Doppi aggettivi / aggettivi trattino ( sloe-eyed ; long-limbed , ecc) funzionano in inglese ma non sempre in Italiano . Ma c’è uno musicalità staccata che è spesso accidentale in Italiano per questo si deve lavorare di più in inglese .
E così via .
Spero che vi piacciono, tanto quanto quelle che amo scriverle.

AliMarcoSeggiano

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4 comments on “Who is my muse? / Chi è la mia musa?

  1. angela highstead
    April 10, 2014

    “Bravo Marco” How lucky are you Ali. My love and blessings to you both. Angela xx

  2. Mike
    April 13, 2014

    An admirable exercise in the art. Kudos.

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